Tuesday, February 19, 2013

Erica- Narrative 24-5-2012

Erica was just a 17 year old girl from a small town. It was a plain and ordinary enough town, with a newspaper press, a convenience store and all the other necessities. It had an eerie feeling about it, however, and everyone seemed to have something to hide, including her. What was this secret of hers you ask? Well that’s what I’m here to tell.
 

It all started out on a boring summer day. Erica was walking through the park when she ran into a boy from her school. He was quite average but he developed a liking towards him throughout the year. Today, they started walking together throughout the park and talking about what they wanted to do with their summer. Then out of nowhere, the boy asked if she would meet him that night by an old abandoned house just outside of town. Erica agreed and said her farewells as it was nearing dusk and she needed to get home.
That night, as she said she would, Erica snuck out of her house and met the boy just outside of town. He led her inside and gave her a tour of the house, saying that he goes there often to be alone because no one bothers to check around there. Once the tour was done, the boy let Erica go exploring.  She came to the bedroom and found that the bed was made perfectly, but the sheets were clean unlike everything else that was covered in dust and cobwebs. She sat down and called to the boy to come upstairs.
 

Once the boy came up, he sat down on the bed with Erica and told her that he had feelings for her. She confessed she did too and so they decided to go out. They kissed and did some things they probably shouldn’t have.  They had a fun night, free of worry and fault. But it’s too bad they never got to tell anyone about it. Around 2 AM the police were called because someone heard a shot go off by the abandoned house. When the police arrived, all that was there were the guy and the girl, still on the bed, dead.
-ES

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